Question

【题目】书面表达

生活中我们经常会遇到各种困难，需要别人的帮助，同时我们也应该帮助别人，大家相互帮助才能使我们的生活更加美好。请你以“I enjoy helping others.” 为话题写一篇英语短文。

提示：1. Share your experience of helping others.

2. What’s your feeling about helping others?

要求：1. 短文内容必须包含以上两点，可适当发挥；

2.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

In the world， everyone needs help. Meanwhile， we should help others. I like helping others.

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The world will be filled with pleasure if everyone gives a hand to others.

Answer 1

【答案】

In the world， everyone needs help. Meanwhile， we should help others. I like helping others.

I still remember my neighbor—an old grandma. She didn’t live with her children because of their busy work. One day she went downstairs， falling down by accident. She couldn’t move. I helped her to call 120 and stayed with her until she felt well. The old grandma thanked me for my help and she gave me a warm hug. From that time， I think helping others is a pleasant thing.

The world will be filled with pleasure if everyone gives a hand to others.

【解析】

试题分析：生活中我们经常会遇到各种困难，需要别人的帮助，同时我们也应该帮助别人，大家相互帮助才能使我们的生活更加美好。请你以“I enjoy helping others.” 为话题写一篇英语短文，文中以第一人称来写。注意书信的称呼和结束语，要把时间和安排交代清，注意一些固定搭配和词组，考查了学生的综合能力。

写作亮点：这篇文章构思新颖，内容包括面很全，语言组织力很强，切中题意，文中出现了一些好的句型如：One day she went downstairs， falling down by accident. She couldn’t move.；.The old grandma thanked me for my help and she gave me a warm hug. 使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。