题目内容
【题目】我们都需要一个健康的环境,但是我们每天都在制造垃圾,环境污染日益恶化,为了人类的生存,我们要从身边小事做起。请根据以下提示,以“Save our world”为标题写一篇英语短文,向大家描述你在平时的生活、学习中是怎样做的。
内容包括:
1. 每天步行上学;
2. 当你离开房间的时候关上灯;
3. 不要订购比你能吃完的更多的食物;
4. 不要使用纸杯和纸袋,使用瓷杯和布袋会更好;
5. 把垃圾分类回收利用;
6. ……
注意:
1. 词数:80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Save our world
As we all know, we produce waste every day. And the environment is getting worse and worse today. In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution. I think we should go to school on foot every day, it is good for our health. Turn off the lights when you leave the room. Do not order more food than you can finish. Don’t use paper cups or paper bags. It is better to use china cups and cloth bags. We can divide rubbish into plastic, glass, paper and rubber.
“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well.
【解析】试题分析:本文属于提纲类短文,话题是“Save our world”,仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】:这是一篇比较优秀的作文,本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点;应用了我们熟悉的句型和短语As we all know, In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution. Turn off the lights when you leave the room.等,语言表达要符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。