Question

【题目】书面表达

亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束！在此离别之际，恰逢《中学生英语》征稿，请你以“A(n) (Lucky/Unusual/Exciting/Proud/Regretful(遗憾的)/……)Thing”为题，简要描述一件你亲身经历的、印象深刻的事情，并谈谈你从这件事中所获得的启示。

要求：1．写短文前，请用一个恰当的形容词补全下面的标题，所用形容词可以从上面括号中选取，也可以另外选择；2．语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；3．文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；4．词数：80～100词。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

A(n) Thing

In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.

Answer 1

【答案】

A Regretful Thing

In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.

Xiao Ming was one of my good friends. One day, a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us. From then on, we didn't talk to each other. I had hoped to make peace with him, but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face. Not until when he moved to another city with his parents did I know I lost my friend forever.

The lesson I learnt from this is that if you realize your mistakes, you should correct them at once, or you may leave yourself lasting regrets.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍自己的亲身经历，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如From then on, we didn't talk to each other. I had hoped to make peace with him, but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。