Question

【题目】书面表达

你的美国笔友 Rick 想了解你最喜欢的老师的情况，请介绍弄初三以来最喜欢的以为老师，谈谈她（他）留给你的深刻印象，给你鼓励和帮助，同时表达你继续学习，回报师恩的心情。开头已给出。

要求：1.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；

2.可以参考下面提示词，也可适当发挥；

3.词数：80 词左右。短文开头部分己给出，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Rick,

I’d like to tell you something about my favorite teacher,Mr.Wang.He is my favorite teacher, who works as English teacher . He is taller than other teachers and has short hair. He always dress a suit when he comes to teach us .
I remembered when I met him for the first time , I was afraid . Because he seems to a little serious . So at first I didn't like him . However ,as time went by , I found he is kind, patient ,helpful,and humorous . All of us feel very happy in his class . He always makes his classes interesting , so we all likes his class and never feel bored. Especially , my English is very poor initially , I felt so self-abased . But he gave me a lot of help and advice on English and we always play together as brothers . Finally, I made great progress . Now , I feel very confident in English . That's so marvelous.
As far as I'm concerned , he has a good knowledge of teaching . We all feel free at his class . I hope he can go on teaching us next year and he will be happy,healthy and successful.

I will study hard and get good grades.

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如I’d like to do，the first time，be afraid，at first，as time went by，all of us，a lot of，play together as brothers，as far as，go on doing等。而He is my favorite teacher, who works as English teacher./ I remembered when I met him for the first time , I was afraid./ He always makes his classes interesting , so we all likes his class and never feel bored./ As far as I'm concerned , he has a good knowledge of teaching ./ I hope he can go on teaching us next year and he will be happy, healthy and successful.等多种从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。