Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷。请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件，帮助他克服焦虑情绪，轻松、快乐地学习和生活。

内容包括：1. 每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候；

2. 一定要告诉别人你的烦恼；

3. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流和老师、家长及时沟通；

4. 可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥。

作文要求：1. 不得照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；

2. 语句连贯，计数80个左右。作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：焦虑的 anxious 与……沟通 communicate with 变得轻松 get relaxed

解决问题 solve problems

Dear Liu Ming,

Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes._______________________________________________

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Liu Ming,

Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. It’s all right to tell others when you are anxious. It’s good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. Thus, you can solve the problems from study or life easily.

Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.

Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.

Please do remember: you’re not alone. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如feel worried or sad，all right，It’s good to do，communicate with，in trouble，solve the problems，listen to，take part in，outdoor activities，try to do，no matter，in the end等。而It’s good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble./ No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.等多种复杂从句结构和Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.

/Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.等非谓语动词结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。