Question

【题目】英文有句谚语 “East, wast, home’s best.” 某英文报以此为标题， 向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。 内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系， 并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。

提示： 1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；

2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3. 词数不少于80， 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。

East, wast, home’s best

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Answer 1

【答案】

There is an old saying “East, wast, home’s best.”. I live in a house in the counrtryside. There is a big living room , three bedrooms , a kitchen, a washroom in it . There are some trees and flowers around my housr. The air is really clean. I often hear birds singing.

There are four people in my house. They are my parents , my sister and I . We are helpful and friendly and we also get on well with each other.\

I’m happy I have a good family. I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work. I will study harder so that I can make more money in the future. With our effort, I am sure my famly will be better and better.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求根据图表介绍自己的家的情况。图表中包括你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并要描述如何让你的家更美好。根据内容主要分三个方面进行介绍。在谈论任何让家更美好方面会用到将来时态。其他两个方面主要用一般现在时。

写作亮点：这篇短文分三个段落对三个主要内容进行了描写，思路清晰，段落分明，语言流畅。大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色.如：hear birds singing, get on well with each other I will do what I can to…, better and better.等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。