Question

【题目】3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华，请通过邮件将此活动情况介绍给Mary。
活动时间：3月5日
活动地点：幸福敬老院(Nursing Home)
参与人员：志愿者
活动形式：1）送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。
2）帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生……
3） 陪老人聊天；为老人表演（唱歌、跳舞），读报……
活动感想：此活动很有意义，从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人……
要求：1）要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，须适当发挥。
2） 词数100字左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Mary,
Thankyou for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March.……
If you have the chance in China, I hope youcan join us.
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March.
As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers brought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too. How happy they were!
Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, some of us performed activities for them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspaper for them. Some of us chatted with them. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.
From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them. In our daily life, we should offer our seats to them on buses. And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly.
If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us
Li Hua
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