Question

【题目】写作（满分20分）

根据下面的提示写一篇短文。

假设你叫李俊，你的美国朋友David想要在中国结交更多的朋友。你通过电子邮件，把你的同学王明介绍给他。王明情况见下表：

性别	男
年龄	14
外貌	方脸，大眼睛，短发，高个子；
个性	很有幽默感，替朋友保守秘密，从不说他人坏话；
爱好	喜欢动物，在家养了一些宠物；
理想	当一名校长 (headmaster)，让学生有更多的时间娱乐；
春节计划	到美国旅游，参观美国白宫。

要求：1. 注意文章条理，语句通顺；2. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不

计入总词数。

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.

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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Maybe you can show him around your country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Jun

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.

Wang Ming is fourteen years old. He has a square face and big eyes. He wears short hair and he is tall.

He has a good sense of humor. You never feel bored when you are with him. He can keep secrets for friends and never says bad words about anyone. He loves animals very much and he keeps some pets like goldfish at home.

He hopes to be a headmaster when he grows up. He wants to let his students have more free time for their hobbies. During the Spring Festival this year, he will go to your country and visit the White House.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。