Question

19．Write at least 60words about"A model student around me"．
Used the suggested questions below（结合你的实际，根据问题提示，以"我身边的模范生"为题，写至少60个词短文，要求意思明确，内容连贯，标点符号）：
Some suggested questions：
•Who is a model student around you？
•Why do you think he/she is a model student？
•What can you learn from him/her？
（考生注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型（一）Although she is busy with her studies，she often gives classmates a hand when they meet difficulties．尽管她忙于她的学习，她经常帮助她的同学当他们遇到困难的时候．（although引导让步状语从句，give sb．a hand 帮助某人）
高分句型（二）What's more，I should also be friendly to the people around me．更重要的是，我也应该对我周围的人友好．（be friendly to sb．对某人友好）

解答 In my view，everyone in my class is very good，but Mary is the model student．（回答写作要点一）She works very hard and always gets high marks．Although she is busy with her studies，she often gives classmates a hand when they meet difficulties．How friendly she is!（回答写作要点二）From her，I am know that being hard-working is really important to us．What's more，I should also be friendly to the people around me．（回答写作要点三）
 In brief，being a friendly and hard-working student is not easy，but I will make every effort to study hard and try to be a model student like her．

点评 书面表达题，考生注意审题，按要点写出内容，表达自己观点时一定紧扣主旨，注意检查是否有语法错误和词数要求．