Question

7．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic‘A（An）unforgettableexperience'．（以《一次…的经历》为题，写一片不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格，题目补充完整）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）
The following points are for your reference：（所给提示仅供参考）
1What kind of experience did you have？
2When and where did it happen？
3What happened to you？
4How did you feel？

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
A policeman saw me and asked me what happened．
这句话中"what happened"为宾语从句，这句话意为：一位警察看见我并且问我发生了什么．
高分句型二：
I was so happy that I cried again．
句中用到了"so…that…如此…以致于…"结构，这句话意为：我是如此的高兴，以致于我又哭了．

解答 An unforgettable experience
It happened six years ago．On a summer vacation，my father took me to Beijing．In the morning，we went to the Great Wall and the Summer Palace．I was very happy．And then in the afternoon，we went shopping．But the shops were too crowded．After I had fun seeing the toys，I couldn't find my father!I was very sad and cried loudly．A policeman saw me and asked me what happened．（高分句型一）I told him．Then he took me to the police station．Half an hour later，my father came．I was so happy that I cried again．（高分句型二）【事情经过】
From then on，I always followed my father or mother when we went shopping，because I was afraid of being lost again．【感受】

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．