Question

15．假设不久前8名无锡青年骑车沿大运河（（the Grand Canal）进行了慈善行活动．请据此在答题卡指定的位置上，以"A Charity Bicycle Trip"为题，为某中学生英文报写一篇报道，内容要点如下：
    1．目的为希望工程筹款；
    2．时间：5月20日离开无锡，6月5日到达北京；
    3．简况：虽然车程漫长，路途艰辛，但是他们一路上精神高昂；在很多人的帮助下，他们筹得善款5万多元；
    4．其它：他们在活动结束后的感受．
    注意：
    1．报道须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
    2．第4要点的内容须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
    3．词数80个左右，报道的开头已经给出，不计人总词数．
                                A Charity Bicycle Trip
    Not long ago，eight young people from Wuxi made a charity bicycle trip along the Grand Canal．__________________

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Though the ride was long and tough，they went all the way in high spirits虽然旅程漫长而艰难，但他们一路还是兴高采烈．though引导的让步状语从句．
句型二：They were proud of what they had done．他们为他们所做的感到自豪．what引导的宾语从句．

解答 A Charity Bicycle Trip
Not long ago，eight young people from Wuxi made a charity bicycle trip along the Grand Canal．The purpose of their trip was to raise money for Project Hope．（此行目的）They left Wuxi on May 20 and arrived in Beijing on June 5．（时间）Though the ride was long and tough，they went all the way in high spirits．【高分句型一】With the help of the people，they collected/raised more than 50，000 yuan．（简况）After the long trip，they were tired，but they were happy．They were proud of what they had done．【高分句型二】It is an unusual experience that they will never forget．（其他）

点评 在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，所以平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．