Question

【题目】假如你最好的朋友叫Tom, 他身上有许多优良的品质，请以My best friend 为题，把你的朋友向大家做个介绍。

姓名	Tom
班级	七年级一班
兴趣爱好	1）. 最喜欢金鱼，喜欢观看它们游来游去。 喜欢各种户外运动，常去野营，喜欢呆在外面。
能力	1）. 文章写得好、钢琴弹得好 2.思维敏捷、计划周密
品性事迹	1）. 乐于助人。是社区中心的志愿者，帮助人们解决各种问题。经常参加为贫困的孩子募集钱这样的活动。 2）. 勇敢(举一例)

要求：1）条理清楚，语意连贯。
2）书写规范，标点正确。
3）正文80字左右。
My best friend

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

My best friend

Tom is my best friend. He is in Class One Grade Seven. He has many hobbies and interests. He likes goldfish best and he likes watching them swim around. He also loves all kinds of outdoor. He often goes camping because he likes being outside.

Tom has different abilities. He writes god articles and plays the piano well. He learns things quickly and plans everything well.

Tom has many good qualities. He is helpful. He is a volunteer at the community center. He is ready to help people with all kinds of problems. He often takes part in activities like raising money for poor children. He is also brave. Last week, he helped his neighbour out of the fire.

【解析】短文叙述的是朋友的情况，所以句子的主语用第三人称单数，句子用一般现在时，要注意不要遗漏要点，要注意句子的上下文的衔接，要用自己熟悉的句式，不要写汉语式的英语，所写的句子要符合英语语法。