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12．中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己．某英文报"学生习作"专栏正在就"学生适当的放松方式"这一话题进行征文．假设你是二十二中初三（3）班的班长，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查．请根据表格提供的调查信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿．

对  象	二十二中初三（3）班
人  数	60人（男：31人；女：29人）
常用放松方式	1．看电视（30人） 2．玩电脑游戏（12人） 3．听音乐（8人） 4．进行体育锻炼（5人） 5．没有时间放松（5人）
你的观点	哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？ 为什么？

注意：1．短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点；
2．词数：80-100．题目和开头已为你写好，不记入总词数．
The Poper Way（s） for Students to Relax
I am the monitor of Class3，Grade 3，No.22middle School．Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class．         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax．
句中"doing sports is a good way"为宾语从句，"another five are too busy to relax．"使用了短语"too…to…太…而不能…"．这句话意为：五位同学认为做运动是一种好方法，但是另外五个太忙而无法放松．
高分句型二：
I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes．
句中"taking exercise is a proper way"为宾语从句，"because it can rest our brains and eyes．"为原因状语从句．这句话意为：我认为做运动是一种适当的放松方式，因为它可以放松我们的大脑和眼睛．

解答 The Proper Ways for Students to Relax
  I am the monitor of Class 3，Grade3，No.22 Middle School．Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class．（点明主题）
  There are 60 students in my class（31 boys and 29 girls ）．Different students have different ways to relax．Half of the students often watch TV.12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax．【高分句型一】（调查结果）
  As  we study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure，every student should choose proper ways to relax．In my opinion，watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax．I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes．【高分句型二】Besides，It can help improve our health．Therefore，I often Play pingpong after class．It's really helpful to both my health and my study．（我的看法）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．