题目内容
12.亲爱的同学们,初中生活即将结束!在此离别之际,恰逢《中学生英语》征稿,请你以"A(n) (Lucky/Unusual/Exciting/Proud/Regretful(遗憾的)/…)Thing"为题,简要描述一件你亲身经历的、印象深刻的事情,并谈谈你从这件事中所获得的启示.要求:1.写短文前,请用一个恰当的形容词补全下面的标题,所用形容词可以从上面括号中选取,也可以另外选择;2.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯;3.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名;4.词数:80~100词.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数.
A(n) Thing
In the past three years,the life of middle school has impressed me deeply.Many stories happened.The following is one of them.
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分析 高分句型一:
I had hoped to make peace with him,but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face.我本来希望和他讲和,但我最终还是失败了,因为我害怕丢脸.
hope to do sth固定句式,希望做某事;fail to do sth做某事失败;because of由于,因为,后跟名词或短语,代词或动名词,在此作原因状语;be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事
高分句型二:
The lesson I learnt from this is that if you realize your mistakes,you should correct them at once,or you may leave yourself lasting regrets.我从中吸取的教训是,如果你意识到你的错误,你应该马上改正,否则你可能会留下永久的遗憾.
The lesson I learnt from this 中,I learnt from this 作先行词the lesson 的定语,构成定语从句,由于先行词作宾语故that或which被省略;that位于系动词is后引导表语从句;if此处引导条件状语从句,主句用一般现在时;or此处为连词,表"否则"
解答 A Regretful Thing
In the past three years,the life of middle school has impressed me deeply.Many stories happened.The following is one of them.(切入主题,引起下文)
Xiao Ming was one of my good friends.One day,a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us.From then on,we didn't talk to each other.I had hoped to make peace with him,but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face.【高分句型一】Not until when he moved to another city with his parents did I know I lost my friend forever.(详细描述事情的经过)
The lesson I learnt from this is that if you realize your mistakes,you should correct them at once,or you may leave yourself lasting regrets.【高分句型二】(从这件事中所获得的启示)
点评 结合命题作文的特点,首先要审好题,严格按照要求去组织文章,并抓住重点.要注意语句通顺、意思连贯.在阐述理想的原因的时候要恰当使用表示顺序的词,使这一部分很有条理.要善于运用好的句型如主语从句、动词不定式和倒装的使用等为文章增色,表达更流畅.要习惯用英语式的思维去组织句子,避免汉语式的英语.
Traffic rules help to keep order on the road.They also help to keep people safe.Traffic accidents killed more than 104,000people in China last year.As we all know there are more cars than before.So drivers and pedestrians (行人) must work together to make the roads much safer.
The pedestrian(行人) has as many rules to follow as the drivers.You should walk on the sidewalk(人行道) on the road.Always look carefully before you walk across the street.
If you often ride a bike,don't ride in the middle of the road or run through red traffic lights.When you ride a bike with a friend,don't look around or talk.
Drivers should slow down at the traffic lights.And the driver and passengers must always wear seat belts (安全带).Without seat belts,they may be badly hurt in a sudden accident.
You must be careful if you have to travel in a bus.Get on or get off a bus only after it stops.When it is full,don't try to get inside,or you may fall off.
Traffic rules are road safety rules.Please remember the famous saying"Thinking about others".
Information Card
| What helps to keep order on the road? | (76)Traffic rules.. |
| How many people lost their lives in traffic accidents in China last year? | (77)More than 104,000 people.. |
| Where should the pedestrian walk on the road? | (78)On the sidewalk.. |
| What should people wear while driving? | (79)Seat belts.. |
| When can you get off the bus? | (80)Only after it stops.. |
---Yes,I will be there.Thank you for _______.( )
| A. | understanding | B. | reminding | C. | noticing | D. | touching |
-What a modest student.( )
| A. | gets off | B. | puts off | C. | shows off | D. | takes off |