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Writing 3(2015江苏盐城滨海县第一次调研)

    母爱情深，母爱无价，学会感恩，学会回报。请你根据下面 的思维导图提供的信息，以“ My mother”为题，写一篇短文，介绍 你的母亲和你的真情故事。

提示：1. 短文应包括思维导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文 连贯，段落分明；

2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；

3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计人总词数。

            My mother

    We need love. We also need to love.The person I love most is my mother.     

Answer 1

Writing 3

[写作提示]

1. 审题：

这是一篇记叙文。以第一人称客观介绍你的母亲，表达你对母亲 的爱。涉及时态较多，要正确使用。

2. 确定要点：

(1) 介绍母亲:年龄、工作、外貌、能力、爱好；

(2) 母亲为你做的事；

(3) 你要为母亲做的事；

(4) 你对母亲的表白。

[参考范文]

            My mother

    We need love. We also need to love.The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old.She is a common worker.She is tall and slim. She likes reading.She can cook delicious food.

    She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for study,though she didn't have much money. She looked after me well when I was ill. She cooked delicious meals for me every day.

    When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job and make money to buy clothes for her. I will go travelling with her. Also I will stay with her when I am free. That's what she wants most,I think.

    Dear mother,I love you forever!