Question

Writing 9(2012 南京)

    上周日在秦淮河边发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根 据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题 为“ A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。

注意：

1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

        A Brave Young Man 

    It was a nice day last Sunday. 

Answer 1

Writing 9

[写作提示]

1. 审题:本文是一篇看图作文，属于记叙文，叙述过去发生的事。 时态以一般过去时为主。

2. 确定要点：

① 时间、地点、人物；

② 事情的起因、经过和结果；

③ 对张明的行为进行简单的评论。

[参考范文]

        A Brave Young Man

    It was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly,Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water.it was very dangerous.Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At the time other people came to offer help. Finally,the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him.