Question

9．假设你是九年级学生李华，最近你们班正在就"成长的烦恼"展开讨论．请你根据以下提示，写一封信给你的外国朋友Tom，告知讨论内容．
注意：词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
Recently our class has talked about"Growing pains"of students，and the main ways to deal with the problems as follows．
First of all，at school we can't get on well with some of our classmates．What's worse，when we can't achieve satisfying grades，we may suffer from great pressure．In addition，our parents are hard on us and we are often forbidden to chat online or play computer games at home．
Faced with such growing pains，firstly，we are supposed to have more heart to heart talks with our classmates and take part in more activities to know more about each other．Secondly，we need to relax ourselves and turn to our teachers and classmates when necessary．Finally，we should respect our parents and more communication is necessary．In that case，we are sure to understand each other better．
Luckily，the growing pains do not last．I believe they will finally change into some valuable experience for our future life．Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①What's worse，②when we can't achieve satisfying grades，we may suffer from great pressure更糟糕的是，当我们不能获得满意的成绩，我们就会有很大的压力．
①What's worse，更糟糕的是
②when引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
we need to relax ourselves and turn to our teachers and classmates when necessary．当有需要的时候我们需要放松自己，找老师和同学帮忙．
when necessary是when it is necessary的缩写．

解答 Dear Tom，
Recently our class has talked about"Growing pains"of students，and the main ways to deal with the problems as follows：
First of all，at school we can't get on well with some of our classmates．What's worse，when we can't achieve satisfying grades，we may suffer from great pressure．【高分句型一】In addition，our parents are hard on us and we are often forbidden to chat online or play computer games at home．（烦恼）
Faced with such growing pains，firstly，we are supposed to have more heart to heart talks with our classmates and take part in more activities to know more about each other．Secondly，we need to relax ourselves and turn to our teachers and classmates when necessary．【高分句型二】Finally，we should respect our parents and more communication is necessary．In that case，we are sure to understand each other better．（对策）
Luckily，the growing pains do not last．I believe they will finally change into some valuable experience for our future life．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．