Question

14．请根据下面提示，以"My best friend and I"为题，写一篇约60词的短文．
1．我的好朋友名叫琳达．
2．我们看上去一样但是我们也有不同．
3．我们都有黑眼睛、黑头发．
4．她比我高，比我文静，很认真．
5．我外向一点，而且比她风趣．
6．我们都喜欢读书，我们能分享一切．
My Best Friend and I
I have a good friend．Her name is Linda．In some ways we look the same．But in other ways we are different．We both have black eyes and black hair．She is taller and quieter than me．She is very careful．I'm a little more outgoing than her．I am also funnier than her．We both like reading．She is good at English．But I am good at Chinese．We often help each other．We both like reading，we can share everything with each other．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I'm a little more outgoing than her我比她外向一点．
a little修饰比较级more outgoing
【高分句型二】
She is good at English她擅长英语．
be good at 擅长

解答 My Best Friend and I
I have a good friend．Her name is Linda．（我的好朋友名叫琳达．）In some ways we look the same．But in other ways we are different（我们看上去一样但是我们也有不同．）．We both have black eyes and black hair．（我们都有黑眼睛、黑头发）She is taller and quieter than me．She is very careful（她比我高，比我文静，很认真．）．I'm a little more outgoing than her．【高分句型一】I am also funnier than her．（我外向一点，而且比她风趣．）We both like reading．She is good at English．【高分句型二】But I am good at Chinese．We often help each other．We both like reading，we can share everything with each other．（我们都喜欢读书，我们能分享一切．）

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．