Question

【题目】书面表达。

请根据中文提供的的相关信息，写一篇英语短文介绍李强，短文开头已给出。要求：语句连贯，词数70个左右。内容包括：

李强是个好学生，学习很努力。他戴着眼镜，留着短发，高高的身材。他虽然住得很远，但从未迟到过。每天早上他会读半小时的英语或语文，然后上课。他擅长于每个科目。

放学后，他会做运动， 因此很健康。他还非常友好，喜欢帮助别人。大家都非常喜欢他。

Li Qiang is a very good student.

Answer 1

【答案】

Li Qiang is a very good student and he works very hard. He is tall with short hair and a pair of glasses. Although he lives far from school, he is never late for class. Every morning, he spends half an hour reading English or Chinese books. After that, he has his lessons. He is good at every subject. After school, he usually plays sports. So he is very healthy. What’s more, he is also friendly and he likes helping others. What a good boy he is! Everyone loves him very much.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一篇文章来介绍李强。首先，要认真审题，掌握题目要求中的要点信息，需要回答的问题。然后整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。要点为：李强是个好学生，学习很努力。他戴着眼镜，留着短发，高高的身材。他虽然住得很远，但从未迟到过。每天早上他会读半小时的英语或语文，然后上课。他擅长于每个科目。放学后，他会做运动， 因此很健康。他还非常友好，喜欢帮助别人。大家都非常喜欢他。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。各种时态的使用非常准确，固定短语“work very hard；live far from school；is good at；is never late for class”等以及复合句“Although he lives far from school, he is never late for class. What a good boy he is! What’s more, he is also friendly and he likes helping others. ”等的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。