Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Tom，这是你的全家福。请根据照片，以“My Family”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文。(提示：可以写家庭成员的组成情况及他们的年龄、职业等。)

My Family

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Answer 1

【答案】My Family

Hello, everyone. This is a picture of my family. We are the Li family. This old man is my grandfather. He is seventy years old. He is fine. This is my father. He is very tall. He is a bus driver. This is my mother. She has long black hair. She is a nurse. Can you see the little girl? She is my sister Li Zihuan. She is only five years old. Look! She is laughing. And this boy is me.

I have a happy family. I love my family.

【解析】

这是一篇图画作文，根据照片介绍自己的家人。首先要注意认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题。根据提示确定文章中心。本文时态因为一般现在时态，注意主谓一致。要使用句型Here is, This/That is, he is, she is等，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。最后注意是否有漏写的情况，有无拼写错误及标点错误等。