你们学校最近就一个好朋友的标准做了一次问卷调查.调查结果如下图．请你以 What a good friend should be like 为题.用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文.报道此次调查结果并谈谈自己的看法．注意:1．词数:80-100(开头已给出.不计入总词数)2．内容须包括以上要点.可适当发挥,3．文中不得出现真实的校名和� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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18．你们学校最近就"一个好朋友的标准"做了一次问卷调查，调查结果如下图．请你以"What a good friend should be like"为题，用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文，报道此次调查结果并谈谈自己的看法．

注意：1．词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2．内容须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实的校名和人名．
What a good friend should be like
Recently，we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．About seven percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome．About nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons．Sixty-seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing，and also they should be good at sports．Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively，kind and helpful but also honest．Good friends should trust each other and share joys．I think to be honest is the most important for us all．．

分析这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"What a good friend should be like"为题，针对一个好朋友的标准的问卷调查结果谈谈看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称辅以第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．调查结果：7%的学生认为是外表漂亮英俊
48%的学生认为是学习勤奋功课好
67的学生认为是%喜欢唱歌运动
95%的学生认为是心地善良，乐于助人，待人诚实
2．自己的看法
常用到的重点短语：
be good at擅长
be fond of 喜欢…
be honest 诚实的
not only…but also…不仅…而且…，
高分句型：
1．Almost all of the students agree①that their friends should be②not only lively，kind and helpful but also honest．
①agree后所接的由that引导的宾语从句．that可以省略．
②not only…but also…不仅…而且…，连接两个对等成分，这里是连接一组形容词，和be构成系表结构．
2．I think①②to be honest is the most important for us all．
①think后接的是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②to be honest动词不定式做主语，谓语用单数is．

解答 Recently，we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．（点题）About seven percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome．（7%的学生认为是外表漂亮英俊）About nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons．（48%的学生认为是学习勤奋功课好）Sixty-seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing，and also they should be good at sports．（67的学生认为是%喜欢唱歌运动） Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively，kind and helpful but also honest．（高分句型）（95%的学生认为是心地善良，乐于助人，待人诚实）Good friends should trust each other and share joys．I think to be honest is the most important for us all．（高分句型）（自己的看法）

点评这是一篇给材料作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．