题目内容
17.你的笔友Sammy想了解你这两天的考试情况以及暑期安排.假定你是陈涛,请根据Sammy在电子邮件中的提问,给他写回信.字数在80字左右.From:Sammy@wde.ac.uk Subject:How are you? |
Hi, How are you?I know you're busy with your English exam right now.How is it?And how was everything yesterday?Anyway,it'll be all over soon.What are you going to do during the summer vacation?And are you ready for your new school life?Please email me and let me know. Sammy |
Subject: I am Wonderful!_Great to hear from you!Yes,I'm OK with my English exam now because English is my favourite.I had a busy and tiring day yesterday but I was happy with the support from my family.Anyway,I'll be free after the exam.During the long summer vacation,I'll probably go to visit my relatives in the countryside and hang out with my friends.I'm looking forward to seeing my new school and making new friends..
分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是假定你是陈涛给朋友Sammy写一封电子邮件告诉他你这两天的考试情况以及暑期安排.时态主要为一般过去时和一般将来时.人称主要为第一人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.这两天的考试情况.
2.暑假安排
3.新学校生活的展望
常用到的重点短语:
hear from sb 收到某人的来信
visit sb拜访某人
hang out闲逛
anyway 无论如何
look forward to 盼望…
make friends 交朋友
高分句型:
1.I had a busy and tiring day yesterday ①but I was happy ②with the support from my family.
①but表转折,连接两个前后意义不同的句子
②with短语,表原因,作原因状语.
2.Anyway,I'll be free after the exam.
anyway无论如何,作为插入语.本句有承上启下的作用.
解答 Great to hear from you!Yes,I'm OK with my English exam now because English is my favourite.I had a busy and tiring day yesterday but I was happy with the support from my family.(高分句型)Anyway,I'll be free after the exam.(这两天的考试情况)(高分句型)During the long summer vacation,I'll probably go to visit my relatives in the countryside and hang out with my friends.(暑假安排)I'm looking forward to seeing my new school and making new friends.(新学校的展望)
点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题,确定文章的中心.表格内容要全部包括在作文中,词数要符合要求.句式表达要正确,注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构.文章结构要清晰.考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理,也可为文章增色不少.
A. | Was | B. | is | C. | are | D. | were |
Group members | What to do on the Internet |
Gao Min | share photos in her QQ Zone(空间) |
Chen Lin | play chess against others |
Ye Qi | learn English |
I | … |
(2)必须包含所给内容,并做适当拓展;
(3)词数70左右.(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Today,more and more students like doing different kinds of things on the Internet.In my group,Gao Min likes taking photos and …
she often shares photos in her QQ Zone.The photos are very beautiful.You can enjoy them anytime.Chen Lin's hobby is playing chess,so he often plays chess against others on the Internet.Ye Qi thinks it's good to learn English on line.She makes many foreign friends and often chats with them in English.As for me,I am interested in playing games with my classmates.It always makes us excited.And I am fond of listening to songs and watching movies on line,too.
The Internet makes our lives colorful.We really like it.
同学们的观点 | 诚实礼貌,有漫心 有爱心 |
学习勤奋,有进步 | |
兴趣广泛,有特长 | |
… | |
你的观点 | … |
2.开头已给出(不计入总词数),你只需接着写;
3.文章中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
4.词数:80一110.
Hello,everybody!I'm very glad to be here to share our opinions on"Campus Star"with you.As a star,he/sheHello,everybody!I'm very glad to be here to share our opinions on"Campus Star"with you.As a star,he/she should be an honest person first.He is also polite and ready to help others any time. Second,a Campus Star should be not only a top student but also a good learner.He studies hard,and makes great progress every term.Third,a star should have wide interests.He takes an active part in sports and other activities.And he is popular at school.
In my opinion,a Campus Star must be a green person.He loves nature.He takes care of the trees and grass around him and tries his best to protect the environment. That's all.
Thank you!