题目内容
8.南京中考在即.假如你是班长,要求与学生谈谈考前几天的注意事项.以下五点必须全部包括在内,也可适当拓展.注意:文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名,篇幅80-100词.短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数.1.合理饮食与睡眠.
2.消除焦虑,充满信心.
3.适度复习并做适当活动.
4.熟悉考场环境,如厕所、考场的位置等.
5.提出希望与祝福.
参考词汇:考场环境:examination environment;
Nanjing Senior high school entrance examination is coming.Everybody wants to do better in it.So get following things ready.First,It's very important for us to pay attention to our diet.Second,we should go to bed on time.You'd better not get too tired while revising your lessons.Third,don't be too nervous.It's necessary to take some exercise as you like.Also remember to get familiar with the examination environment,such as the toilet,the test room and so on.And above all,be confident of yourself.
If you get ready the things that I mention above,your dream will come true.Good luck,everybody!.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是谈谈中考前几天的注意事项.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第二、三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.合理饮食与睡眠.
2.消除焦虑,充满信心.
3.适度复习并做适当活动.
4.熟悉考场环境,如厕所、考场的位置等.
5.提出希望与祝福.
常用到的重点短语:
pay attention to 关注
on time 准时
had better do sth 最好做某事
remember to do sth 记得去做某事
such as 例如
above all 最重要的
【高分句型】
1.First,①It's very important for us to②pay attention to our diet.
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的,it是形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.
②pay attention to 关注
2.①If you get ready the things ②that I mention above,your dream will come true.
①if引导的条件状语从句,遵循主将从现的规则.
②that I mention above定语从句,that是关系词作为从句的宾语,先行词是things.
解答 Sample writing:
Nanjing Senior high school entrance examination is coming.Everybody wants to do better in it.So get following things ready.First,It's very important for us to pay attention to our diet(合理饮食).【高分句型】Second,we should go to bed on time.You'd better not get too tired while revising your lessons(合理睡眠,适当复习).Third,don't be too nervous.(消除焦虑)It's necessary to take some exercise as you like.(做适当活动)Also remember to get familiar with the examination environment,such as the toilet,the test room and so on.(熟悉考场环境)And above all,be confident of yourself.(充满信心)
If you get ready the things that I mention above,your dream will come true.【高分句型】Good luck,everybody!(提出希望与祝福)
点评 本文是一篇给材料作文,短文的开头已经给出.写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料,确定写作内容,注意将这些要点全部表达出来,并且要有适当的发挥,在谈到自己的观点时,要结合活动内容,写出自己的观点.
Do you like traveling?How can you make your trip interesting?Here's some advice.
Read!
Before you leave,you should find some information about the place,such as geography,history and people.You can understand the place better by reading.
Take photos!
If you want to take some photos,remember to choose the most special sights.Don't choose the sight you can see in other places.For example,Qingdao and Ningbo are coastal(海滨的)cities,so don't only take photos of the sea.You should take photos of something else too.
Taste!
You'd better taste some specials in the area.Food in some places is bery delicious.So why not taste it?Maybe you have just one chance to taste it in your life.
Write!
When you visit a place,you schould take a pen and a notebook,so you can write down what you see and what you think during the trip.
(51)advice about traveling
| Read | To know (52)information about the place to be visited. |
| Take photos | To take photos of the most (53)special sights. |
| (54)Taste | To eat some specials in the area. |
| Write | To remember what you (55)see and think. |
| A. | put out | B. | take out | C. | hand out | D. | hung out |
-The Great Wall.( )
| A. | where they go | B. | where do they go | ||
| C. | where they went | D. | where did they go |
| A. | where does Jimmy live | |
| B. | what is Jimmy doing | |
| C. | how long Jimmy works there | |
| D. | how did Jimmy go to the factory |
| A. | the post office is | B. | the post office was | ||
| C. | is the post office | D. | was the post office |
-Oh,she is an exchange student in our school.( )
| A. | why she came here | B. | what she does | ||
| C. | who she is |
| About Sophia | About the class |
| from Sydney,15years old | hard-working |
| out-going,happy | helpful,get along well |
| good at swimming | groupwork |
| … | … |
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80-100;
(4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数.
短文首句:Hello,class,May I have your attention,please?
Today,wehaveanewclassmate.HernameisSophia.SheisfromSydney,Australia,andsheis15yearsold.Sheisanout-goinggirlwithbigeyesandshewouldliketomakeothershappy.Sheisgoodatswimming.Alltheclassmatesinourclassarehard-workingandhelpful.SoIthinkwecangetonwellwithSophia.Ihopewecandoalotofgroupworkandmakearapidprogresstogetherinthefuture.
That'sall,thankyou..
-You should __________ junk food if you want to keep in good health.( )
| A. | look forward to | B. | get along with | C. | come up with | D. | stay away from |