题目内容
【题目】 下学期，你的表弟Tom将要作为交换生到你们班上学习，班主任请你在班会课上介绍下Tom的情况，以便让同学们更快地了解他。请根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的文章。
姓名 | Tom |
年龄 | 13岁 |
兴趣爱好 | 最喜欢金鱼，喜欢观看它们游来游去。 喜欢各种户外运动，常去野营。 |
能力 | 1.文章写得好、钢琴弹得好 2.思维敏捷、计划周密 |
品性事迹 | 1.乐于助人。是社区中心的志愿者，帮助人们解决各种问题。经常参加为贫困的孩子募集钱这样的活动。 2.很有幽默感，讲有趣的笑话，使我大笑 |
要求：
1.条理清楚，语意连贯。
2.书写规范，标点正确。
3.正文80字左右。
Hello, everyone. My cousin Tom will come to our class as an exchange student. Now I would like to tell you something about him.
My cousin Tom is_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
After Tom enters our class, you will know more about him. You will find that he is really kind and excellent. He will be our good friend.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. My cousin Tom will come to our class as an exchange student. Now I would like to tell you something about him.
My cousin Tom is 13 years old. He has many hobbies and interests. He likes gold fish best and likes watching them swim around. He also loves all kinds of outdoor sports. He often goes camping because he likes being outside.
Tom has different abilities. He writes good articles and plays the piano well. He learns things quickly and plans everything well.
Tom has many good qualities. He is helpful and is a volunteer at the community center. When people have all kinds of problems, he is ready to help them. He often takes part in activities like raising money for poor children. Tom is very humorous and often tells us jokes to make us laugh.
After Tom enters our class, you will know more about him. You will find that he is really kind and excellent. He will be our good friend.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照所给的提纲，就年龄、兴趣爱好、能力和品性事迹来介绍自己的表弟Tom。写作内容要涵盖题干中要求的要点，紧扣题目。写作前要注意分层描写，理顺流程内容，力争做到言简意赅，语句流畅。文章主体人称为第三人称，主要时态为一般现在式。
【题目】
【1】Karen is a middle school student.Her home is very far from the school.She has lunch at the school’s dining hall. 【2】.Jimmy is a good student.He does well in all subjects.Today he is on duty(值日)to clean the blackboard. 【3】The Browns are going to Zhuhai Chimelong Ocean Park this weekend.They will go there in their car.Now they are on the road. 【4】Ben’s son likes animals very much.So he will take his son to Chimelong Safari Park(长隆野生动物世界) this Friday. 【5】Robert has a fever(发烧) and coughs a lot.His mother has to take him to the hospital. | A.Don’t walk near the animals.Don’t touch them or take photos with them.You can’t give food to the animals because you don’t know what food they can eat. B.In the hospital you have to be quiet and never talk loudly.You mustn’t smoke.Don’t ask people why they’re in the hospital. C.We must stop our car when the lights are red.Look at the sign.When we cross the road, make sure there are no cars coming. D.I have many rules at home.In the morning, I must make my bed.On the school days, I must go home on time.I can’t play basketball after school. E.We must follow the rules in the dormitory(宿舍).We can’t talk or make noise when others are sleeping.We must go to bed and get up on time. F.We have to wait in line to buy the food in the dining hall.We can’t waste food.We must have dinner at the same place. G.First, clean the blackboard after each class.Second, keep your school things tidy and put your books in good order.Third, clean the floor every day. |