题目内容
【题目】写作。
Having studied in this school for almost three years, you are about to graduate (毕业). There must be something that you will always remember. Please write a passage about your Junior school life. The following points should be included.
1. How your junior school life is.
2. Things/moments that you won’t forget.
3. The regrets in the three years.
4. Plans for your future.
5. A natural ending.
【答案】I'm lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
【解析】学生们已经度过了三年的初中生活,在这三年里,一定有一些事是他们无法忘记的。这篇作文要求学生们介绍一下自己的初中生活。题目中列出了一些要点,如初中生活的感受、难忘的事情或时刻、后悔的事情、未来的计划,然后再加上一个自然的结尾。写作时,我们就可以利用这些要点来组织语言,充实文章的内容。通过分析可知,这篇短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主,注意谓语动词形式的变化。另一个难点是英语表达和汉语习惯是不一样的,不能逐词翻译,而应从句式整体考虑,使用恰当的词汇和句型。可以多用简单句,如主谓宾结构、主系表结构等,点缀一些并列句和复合句或较高级的句型,调整文章节奏,提升文章档次。合理安排文章结构,注意语句之间的衔接,使整篇短文意思连贯,表达流畅。