题目内容
【题目】书面表达(本题15分)根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卷指定的位置上。
失败是成功之母。在过去的初三生活中,你是否犯过错误并从中得到了宝贵的经验与教训,从而取得进步?现在请你谈谈你自己在错误中学到的东西。
内容要求如下:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.至少从两个方面谈谈你的进步。
3.文章层次清晰,结构完整,语句连贯.
4.词数:80~100词。
【答案】One possible version:
During the past three years, I have made many mistakes. Also, I have got great experience from them.
On the one hand, I have become better at getting on with people. At first, it was difficult for me to get along with my classmates, so I kept myself away from others. Later I found out the reasons and actively made new friends. Now, I have lots of friends. On the other hand, I have become much more confident. In the beginning, I hated going to school and doing all the homework. I acted as a bad student. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made great progress and now I do well in all the subjects.
Failure is the mother of success. I believe I can learn to be even better after my middle school life.
【解析】试题分析:本文要求以失败是成功之母为话题作文。结合学习生活实际,讲述自己过去的犯错经历要用一般过去时,从错误取得的经验教训的句子多用现在完成时。时态考点多,要注意把握。过去犯过的错要提到,从错误中取得的经验教训是重点,得详写,在错误中取得了经验教训,对将来要充满希望,这点要写到,以立意深远。