Question

【题目】假如Denise是你们班新来的外教，她想了解你们班学生的英语写作水平，为此，她用中文简单介绍了自己五年前和现在的一些情况，要求你们写一篇介绍她的英语短文。请你根据以下表格内容提示，完成这篇短文。

要求：1. 根据表格内容进行写作，可适当发挥；

2. 灵活运用本单元所学短语used to;

3. 90词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

	五年前	现在
体貌特征	胖，长卷发	瘦，短直发
性格	安静，不爱说话	活跃，幽默
爱好	听音乐	旅游
生活方式	经常吃快餐	在家自己做饭

Denise is our new foreign teacher. She has changed a lot in the past five years.

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

Denise is our new foreign teacher. She has changed a lot in the past five years.

Five years ago, she was heavy and had long curly hair. But now she is thin and has short straight hair. As for her personality, she used to be quiet and didn’t like talking. However, she is active and humorous now. She often makes us laugh in class. Denise used to listen to music, but now she spends much of her free time traveling all over the world. She says it’s exciting. In the past, she often ate fast food. Now, she loves to cook at home on her own. She thinks it’s relaxing.

【解析】

本篇为材料作文，要求按照提示，完成一篇关于外教老师Denise五年前和现在的一些情况；要灵活运用本单元所学短语used to，根据表格内容进行写作，可适当发挥。

1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求用第三人称的方式介绍外教老师Denise五年前和现在的一些情况；介绍过去的事情，用一般过去时；介绍现状用一般现在时；书写时要注意用全表格提供的材料，文句通顺，内容完整。