Question

15．期末考试来临，很多学生为了取得好成绩，学习状态是这样的

请根据下面的图片给出建议：

请根据图片内容，首先对学生的学习生活状态进行描述，然后根据图片内容给出合理的建议．
The end-of-year exam is coming，                                                

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I think it is harmful to our health and we can't study well．我认为这对我们的健康是有害的，我们不能学习好．  这是一个宾语从句，I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句．
 高分句型二
  If we have enough sleep at night，we can study better next day．如果我们有足够的睡眠，第二天我们可以更好的学习．这是if引导的条件状语从句，如果…．

解答 The end-of-year exam is coming．Lots of students go to bed very late in order to go over lessons．But next day，they feel sleepy in class．I think it is harmful to our health and we can't study well【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】．【要点二，给出建议】．These are my suggestions．First，we can listen to music in free time．Music can make us relaxed．Second，why don't we go to bed early．If we have enough sleep at night，we can study better next day【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】这是if引导的条件状语从句．Third，it is a good idea to go for a run in the morning．It can make us healthy and active．I think health is the most important．So I think we should keep healthy and feel relaxed first，and then we can work hard．【要点一，期末考试来临，学生的学习状态】

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