Question

【题目】书面表达。

假如你是Ann，Amy是你的同班同学，你们两个在相貌上有很大不同。请根据下表中提供的信息，描述一下你和你同桌的外貌特征。

Name	The color of eyes	Hair	Build
Ann	blue	brown，long，straight	short and heavy
Amy	brown	brown，short，curly	tall and thin

Answer 1

【答案】My__name__is__Ann.I__have__a__classmate.Her__name__is__Amy.We__are__good__friends.But__we__have__different__looks.I__have__blue__eyes，and__she__has__brown__eyes.We__both__have__brown__hair，but__my__hair__is__long__and__straight，and__she__has__short__curly__hair.I'm__short__and__heavy.She__is__tall__and__thin.We__often__help__each__other.I__like__my__deskmate__very__much

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be good friends，different looks，long and straight，short and heavy，tall and thin，help each other，very much等。而We both have brown hair，but my hair is long and straight，and she has short curly hair.长句复杂结构的运用，是本文的最大亮点。