题目内容
【题目】书面表达
随着互联网和手机终端发展,成瘾性网络游戏使一些中学生沉迷其中,影响了学习进步和身心健康。上周你们学校开展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many computer games ”为主题的专题讨论。请根据下表中的要点提示,写一篇短文,提出一些意见。
学校要做些什么 | 1.开班会课讨论网络游戏的优缺点; 2.开展有益的校外活动,如运动会,外出游玩等; 3.多与那些痴迷于游戏和聊天的学生进行交流, ……; |
家长要做些什么 | 1.自己少玩手机,多陪伴,……; 2.密切配合学校,……; |
学生要做些什么 | ……(至少两点) |
注意 1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2.词数100左右,短文开头已给出,不计总词数;
3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名;
Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many computer games .The students have different opinions.
【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many computer games. The students have different opinions.
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can communicate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.
When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.
As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must come first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文。给出了一些要点,并给出了作文的开头。我们只要用英语正确的把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点就行。动笔前要真人阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当的发挥。根据题目要求,短文是一篇议论文,时态用一般现在时,人称为第三人称。写作中要注意适当使用连词,注意上下文紧密联系。符合逻辑关系。
高分句型【1】
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他们认为他们的学校可以开班会,帮助他们认识到互联网的利与弊。
动词不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.用作目的状语。
高分句型【2】
Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外,学校应该定期举办有益的校外活动。
此句是含有情态动词的被动语态。其构成为:情态动词+be+及物动词的过去分词。
高分句型【3】
Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 与学校紧密合作是家长帮助他们的另一重要途径。
动名词Working closely with schools作主语,视作单数,因此be动词用is。