Question

4．假如你是某报社英文专招的编辑Lily，下面是一个叫孙林的女孩给你发来的一封电子邮件，请根据邮件内容给她回复，并提出至少两点建议．
注意：1．邮件中不能出现自己的真实姓名和校名．
2．词数：80字左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．

Dear Lily． Now I am new here．I can't understand what the teacher says．I am afraid to talk with my classmates in English．The biggest problem for me is that I can't read fast and I even couldn't sleep the night before big exams．Could you give me some advice？ Yours， Sun Lin

Dear Sun Lin
I'm sorry to learn that you are having some problems with your English learning．           ．
Yours，
Lily．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 you should try your best to speak English as much as possible．  你应该尽可能地多说英语． try one's best to do sth．  尽某人最大努力做某事．
高分句型二
  Listening to tapes and watching English movies can also help you．听磁带和看英语电影也可以帮助你．本句Listening to tapes and watching English movies 是动名词做主语．

解答 Dear Sun Lin，
I'm sorry to learn that you are having s ome problems with your English learning．Here is some advice for you．【开头点明主题】Firstly，you should try your best to speak English as much as possible【高分句型一，注意try one's best to do sth．使用】．Don't be afraid of making mistakes．Listening to tapes and watching English movies can also help you．【高分句型二，注意动名词的使用】Secondly，you should start reading the books that you can understand．Remember not to look up the new words one by one while reading．Thirdly，don't think too much before exams．Listen to some light music the night before exams，and you will feel relaxed．【正文部分详细介绍自己】
I hope you will feel better soon．【结尾紧扣主题】
Yours，Lily

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．