Question

同学们即将毕业，成为一个高中生了，请谈谈这些年来你较之过去的成长和变化。80词左右。（用used to 表达）

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I will graduate from my middle school.A few months later, I’ll become a senior middle school student.In the past three years, I have been very happy and changed a lot than before.I used to be a small boy.But now I’m taller and stronger.I used to dislike talking to others and have no friends.With the help of my teachers and classmates, I’ve grown into an outstanding and sunny boy.I have many friends and get on well with others now.I’m also better at my studies.I believe in the future I will be better and better.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们谈谈这些年来你较之过去的成长和变化。根据题目要求，我们可以主要从以下几点进行表达：一是过去与现在外貌的变化；二是过去与现在性格的变化；最后是学业成绩等的变化等。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据以上所列出的内容，讲述了自己的变化与不同，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I will graduate from my middle school.A few months later, I’ll become a senior middle school student.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I believe in the future I will be better and better.等。

考点：话题类作文。