Question

【题目】书面表达

假设Kangkang是你的新朋友,请以My New Friend为题, 根据表格内提示的内容用英语写一篇短文, 介绍一下他，开头已给出。

要求：1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，可适当发挥；

2. 不少于60词。

Name	Kangkang
Age	12
From	Fuzhou, China
Looks	round face, big eyes, tall and strong
Clothes	yellow T-shirt, black pants, white shoes
Favorite actor	Bruce Lee
Father	a worker, in an office
Mother	a teacher, in a school

I have a new friend.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My New Friend

I have a new friend. His name is Kang Kang. He is twelve years old. He is from Fuzhou ,China. He has a round face and big eyes. He is tall and strong. He is in a yellow T-shirt, black pants and white shoes. His favorite actor is Bruce Lee. His father is a worker in an office. His mother is a teacher in a school. He has a happy family.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的新朋友康康。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：His name is…， He is…, He has…, His favorite actor is…,His mother is等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，写作中要完整地表达出提纲中所要求内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的新朋友的名字，接下来介绍他的长相和穿着，最后介绍他有一个幸福的家庭。此处be from, a round face, in a yellow T-shirt, in an office, in a school等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。