Question

【题目】下面是有关中学生睡眠情况的调查，请据表格提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文。

项 目	内 容
日睡眠量	多数中学生睡眠不足7小时，有的甚至不足6小时，大大低于8小时的标准。
原 因	1.太多的作业； 2.家庭、学校过于关注学生成绩，而忽视学生的身心健康； 3.多数学生睡觉前喜欢玩手机，导致休息很晚; 4.……
对 策	1.减少作业量； 2.睡前远离数码产品； 3......

注意： 1、可以适当增加细节，使短文连贯、完整；

2、文章开头已经给出，但不计入总字数；

3、参考词汇：调查survey；数码产品digital devices。

According to a survey, we know most middle school students sleep less than 7 hours each night, much less than required.

Answer 1

【答案】

According to a survey, we know most middle school students sleep less than 7 hours each night, much less than required.

First of all, the students have too much homework. Second, schools and parents pay less attention to their sleep. Another important reason is that many students play with their cell phones or iPads before sleeping. This is one of the main reasons for bad sleep. Other reasons include stress and bad moods.

So we must take some ways to stop this. First, less homework should be given to the students by teachers and parents. Second, students need to keep away from digital devices for at least an hour before sleep .Last, more attention should be paid to their health.

【解析】

试题分析：根据题目提示，我们应该确定本文的时态应该用一般现在时；注意描述的顺序；注意时态，人称和固定词组搭配，注意连词的运用。注意句子的顺畅，应符合英语的表达习惯。

写作亮点：文中用了许多固定短语，如less than，pay attention to，keep away from, at least等；表示顺序的副词first of all，second， last能够很好的连接文章; 文章的句式也较丰富，简单句、表语从句，被动句等都有所使用。根据要求，做了恰到好处的发挥，效果不错。