Question

【题目】本学期马上就要结束了，请你根据自己在这个学期的表现写一份总结，并谈谈自己对新学期的规划。

提示:

要求:

1. 参考提示要点，可适当发挥,使内容更加充实;

2. 语句通顺、意思连贯书写工整;

3. 词数:不少于80词(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。

This term will be over. When I look back, I find that

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In a word (总之)，I will try my best to be a better student next term.

Answer 1

【答案】This term will be over. When I look back, I find that my math improved a lot because of my hard work. However, my English is still not as good as some students in my class. I plan to work harder at English next term. In my free time, I took some guitar lessons. It’s interesting to play the guitar, so I’ll keep taking guitar lessons next term. I will also join a swimming club in the new term because swimming is good for my health.

In a word, I will try my best to be a better students next term.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们对自己这一学期的表现做一个总结，并谈谈下学期的规划。题目中用图表的形式罗列了文章的写作提纲，仔细浏览图表可知，文章中应包括以下内容：首先介绍自己在学习上取得的进步和遇到的困难；然后介绍在文娱、体育等方面的发展情况；最后提出下学期的规划。题目中只给出了文章的“骨架”，而“血肉”需要学生们自己发挥想象力，补充文章的细节，使文章内容丰富、完整，这是写作中的一个难点。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般将来时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语句式的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译；应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。例如可以简单句结构为主，使表达简洁、清晰，也不易出错。为了提升作文档次，可以穿插使用并列句或者复合句等长句，或非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。