Question

【题目】In 60 to 120 words, write a review about a hotel you stayed at.(根据所给提示针对你曾经住过的宾馆，写一篇60-120个词的评论，标点符号不占格）

In your review, you may include:

-the name of the hotel - the price

-what you liked about it what you didn’t like about it

-where you got the information about it – your recommendation (推荐）

(注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息否则不予评分。）

Answer 1

【答案】Yuan Hongdao hotel is the best hotel that I have stayed in.Although it isn't too big, many travelers like it. Its price is very low,and it makes travelers feel at home.And service is very great,too.It provids guests with free breafast.At the same time,the master is very friendly and enthusiastic ,so he has many friends and guests. Then,every room is different with special decoration.Your staying here isn’t boring. If you don't know how to spend your free time,it is a good choice to come here.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，评价我曾经住过的一家宾馆。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第二，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Yuan Hongdao hotel is……，Its price is……，It provides…….，If you don't know……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。