Question

【题目】根据下面图示，请你代表九(1)班全体学生向张老师推荐Jack当新学期的班长。因为Jack具有以下品质：

要求：

1、短文必须包括提示内容，并组适当增加细节(根据形容词，必须用相应的行为动作进行描述)。

3、字数100左右，短文开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Zhang,

We are writing to recommend Jack as our new monitor. We think he has

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Yours sincerely,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,

We are writing to recommend Jack as our new monitor. We think he has many strong qualities for this position.

Jack is very confident. He thinks he can do anything if he tries his best. He is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people.Jack is organized and never forgets the things he needs to do He has learnt to use the computer to get himself more organized. Jack is clever. He always comes up with good ideas and he has won several science competitions. Jack is also creative. He is good at painting. His creative works have won high praise from classmates and teachers.

We think Jack is the most suitable person to be our new chairperson. We hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Tom

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们写一封推荐信，推荐Jack做新学期的班长，并讲述其原因。题目中用图示展示了Jack具备的一些品质，我们要将这些品质叙述清楚。观察图表可知，这里只给出了四个形容词clever聪明、confident仔细、creative有创造性、organized做事有条理的。我们应根据这些形容词，补充一些细节，用相应的行为动作来体现他们。这些内容是需要学生们自己发挥想象力，是写作中一个最大的难点。其次需要注意文章语言的表达，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，所以我们不能用汉语的思维逐词翻译，应使用适当的句型、完整的句式结构，并选择适当的词和短语，运用合适的时态。为提升文章的档次，还应注意使用一些较复杂的句式结构，如各类从句，像宾语从句、状语从句等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，增强文章的连贯性。