Question

15．青少年是祖国的未来，也是城市的名片．在创建全国文明城市的过程中，我市举办了"美德少年"评选活动．假如你是"美德少年"的争创者，请根据下列表格中的提示，以"Be a virtue teenager，build a civilized city"为题，用英语写一份倡议书，号召大家积极争做"美德少年"，为港城添彩．

主题	做"美德少年"，创文明城市
内容	待人方面：尊老爱幼，友好互助 言谈方面：语言文明，耐心倾听 出行方面：遵守交规，主动礼让
你的观点	联系实际，谈谈你的观点（至少两点）

注意：90词左右．短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数．
文中不得提及有关考生的个人的身份的任何信息，如：校名，人名等．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we should try our best to study hard and obey all the school rules我应该尽力去努力学习遵守校规．
try one's best to do sth尽力做某事
【高分句型二】
I hope everyone will join us and try to be a virtue teenager我希望每个人都能加入我们尽力成为一个美德少年．
hope后加宾语从句

解答 Be a virtue teenager，build a civilized city
   Being a teenager of Lianyungang，what should we do to help build a civilized city？（主题） Firstly，when in public places，we should respect the elderly and take care of the young．We should also be friendly and helpful to others； Secondly，when having a conversation，we should speak politely and be patient enough to listen； Thirdly，when on the road，we should obey the traffic rules and give seats when necessary．（内容）
    As s junior students，I think it's our duty to do as the above．At the same time，we should try our best to study hard and obey all the school rules．【高分句型一】In this way，we can be a virtue teenager and help to build our city into a civilized one．I hope everyone will join us and try to be a virtue teenager．【高分句型二】（我的观点）

点评 在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．