题目内容
【题目】书面表达
科学是推动人类发展最重要的因素, 每一项发明的出现都可能对我们的生活产生重大影响, 请根据下图写一篇80个词左右的短文阐述你的观点。
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【答案】Science is the most important thing in the development of human beings. The great development in the field of the medicine has made it possible for us to live longer. The planes and trains have made our life more and more comfortable and provide convenient tools for business development. The computer, the greatest invention in the 20th century, is playing an important role in our daily life. We should work hard to make our life better.
【解析】本文属于话题作文,阐述发明对我们生活产生的重大影响。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如the most important thing, the development of human being, make it possible to, more and more comfortable, provide, play an important role in, daily life以及make our life better等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。