题目内容
8.我们知道,父母对自己的子女是最无私的,从不索求回报.作为一名初中即将毕业的学生,你有着怎样的感受?请你根据写作要点提示,以"The words I want to say most to my father/mother/parents."为题写一篇短文.1.写作要点提示:
1)父亲或母亲在生活和学习上对你的照顾和帮助;
2)在家里父亲或母亲是怎样辛勤劳动,无怨无悔的;
3)你最想对父亲或母亲说的一句话是….
2.写作要求:
短文内容应包含所提示的要点,语言要流畅,可围绕提示要点适当增加情节,以使短文意思连贯; 短文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;短文字数90词左右.
Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad,
WordsfailmewhenIwanttoexpressmythankstoyou.You've taken good care of me in the past three years.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and cheer me up.You provide a happy life for me.Your do much for me and give me so much love.Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it.You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others.With your help,I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends.I'm very thankful for all thatyou has done for me.I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes
Yours
Son.
分析 【高分句型一】
1.①When I was in trouble,you②used to encourage me and cheer me up.
①when引导的时间状语从句.in trouble 处于困境
②used to do sth 过去常常做某事,cheer up 使振奋起来.
【高分句型二】
2.①Once I ②argued with my classmates and I didn't know③how to deal with it.
①once 副词.曾经.
②argue with sb 与某人争吵
③疑问词+to do sth 作为know的宾语. deal with 处理
【高分句型三】
3.I'm ①so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and ②try to do better in the future.
①so…that如此…以至于,that引导的结果状语从句.
②try to do sth 尽力做某事
解答 Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad,(感谢的对象)
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.You've taken good care of me in the past three years.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and cheer me up.【高分句型一】You provide a happy life for me.Your do much for me and give me so much love.Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it.【高分句型二】You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others.With your help,I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends.I'm very thankful for all that you has done for me..(在生活和学习上对你的照顾和帮助,父亲或母亲是怎样辛勤劳动,无怨无悔的)I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future.【高分句型三】(最想对父亲或母亲说的一句话)
Best wishes
Yours
点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来,在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体.同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点.
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