Question

【题目】书面表达 （本大题共10分）

假如你是Simon, 你购买了某公司生产的手机，但出现故障。请根据下列要点，给该公司售后服务部写一封电子邮件。

存在问题	1. 买了两个半月。 花了1000多元钱。 2. 上周出现问题。不能发短信，也不能打电话。 3. 前几天去店里让人修理，被告知不值得维修。换新手机至少等三个月。
感受和要求	1. I feel… 2. I hope…

注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；

2.短文应把表格中所示内容表达完整，句式规范，字迹工整；

3.省略部分作2-3句合理发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you for the mobile phone by your company.

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

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Thank you for your attention.

Yours sincerely

Simon

Answer 1

【答案】

I am writing to you for the mobile phone by your company.

I have had it for two and a half months. It cost me more than one thousand yuan. But it went wrong last week. I couldn’t send text messages and I couldn’t make phone calls, either. I had it fixed in the shop the other day. I was told that it was not worth fixing. If I want to change a new one, I need to wait for at least three months. I feel sorry that I have bought a mobile phone like this. I hope to have a new one, or I want my money back.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I was told that it was not worth fixing.等，If等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。