Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是某英语报刊“Heart to Heart”栏目的编辑，负责回复读者来信。请回复下面一封来信，要求针对来信内容对来信者进行安慰、鼓励，并对其“学得很累”和“感到孤独”的状况提出建议。词数：80个左右。

Dear Editor,

I’m a Junior 3 student. I failed most of my final exams in my old school last year and my parents asked me to come to this new school. However, now I find I can’t study as hard as before and easily feel tired. I also feel very lonely among the new classmates. When in the old school, I could often share my happiness and sadness with my friends. So I think of my old classmates and friends quite often these days.

Grace

Dear Grace,

It is natural that you don’t feel at home in your new class as you did in your old one.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Grace,

It is natural that you don’t feel at home in your new class as you did in your old one. You failed to pass the exams last year but you have set new goals to achieve even more this year.

The reason why you feel too tired to study may be that you aren’t confident enough. What you must do now is to organize your time well. Don’t work too late or too hard. In this way you are unlikely to get tired.

You miss your old classmates because you studied with them for several years. You may try to know your new classmates and try to make friends with them. I think the more you know about them, the more you will like them. It won’t be long before you find them to be just as understanding as your old ones.

I believe you can get along well with your new classmates and get good grades soon.

Editor

【解析】

试题分析：我们首先应该认真阅读读者来信，熟知信的内容，然后根据信中的问题组织内容，然后进行回复。本文应可以用第二人称，主要使用一般现在时态。灵活采用不同的表达方式将问题与建议条理地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。

写作亮点：本文作者能就读者的问题提出具体的建议，叙事明确具体，语言结构丰富,如：try to do sth, make friends, get along well with等；宾语从句、时间状语从句、定语从句、比较状语从句得到了灵活使用。