Question

【题目】今年初《流浪地球》在中国火热上映。影片故事设定在2075年，讲述太阳即将毁火，已经不适合人类生存，而面对绝境，人类将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类新家园的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老师问:希望是什么?班长回答:希望是我们这个年代钻石一样的东西。你的笔友Demon观看后，印象深刻，给你写了一封邮件。请你根据邮件内容结合你的情况，用英语回复。

To: LiHua@China. com

From: Demon@ America. com

Subject:Problems and hope

Dear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things? What problems do you often meet in your school life? How do you usually solve your problems? Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her? What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything. Best wishes, Demon

注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;

2.回复必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;

3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Demon

I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Please write to me and tell me your view.

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Demon，

I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don't want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.

In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always comes to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.

I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?

Please write to me and tell me your view.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

这是一篇书信作文。根据所给出的材料内容可知文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先要注意书信的书写格式，要对来信中的问题作出全面的答复。同时在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。