Question

【题目】书面表达（本题有1小题；共计20分）

“广场舞”square dancing作为一种集体娱乐健身的活动方式越来越受到中国大妈的追捧，但其所产生的噪音，或因抢占地盘所引发的矛盾也越来越多，请谈一谈你对“广场舞”的看法并提出适当建议。

advantage	keep fit
	make new friends
	...
disadvantage	make much noise
	fight for a dancing place
	...
My opinion

注意：(1)短文必须涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发挥

（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；

（3）词数：80~100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Square Dancing

Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China.

Answer 1

【答案】

Possible versions:

Square Dancing

Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China. Not only is it a good way of keeping fit, but also it’s a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to make and meet friends. No wonder that most dancers say that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident. However, when people in large number dance to loud music, they create the noise that neighborhoods find it painful to bear. What’s worse, some dancers even fight for a certain place to dance and lead to blooding.

In my opinion, we shouldn’t dance too late or dance to too loud music to disturb others’ life. Let’s dance politely and happily.

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【解析】

试题这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了连接词Not only …but also、However，以及What’s worse，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。