Question

【题目】Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to be a/an ______ in group work”. （以“在小组活动中我想做_________”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）请在答题纸上把作文题目补充完整。

在课堂小组合作活动中，有不同的角色分工，每个角色都非常重要。假设有以下四个角色：小组长（leader）,记录员（secretary），发言人（spokesperson）和观察员（observer）,你想选择哪个角色？为什么？你将如何做好你的工作？

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

I want to be a secretary in group work. In a group activity, each role is of great importance. As to me, I’d like to be a secretary. I am a good listener and recorder, so I believe I am qualified for this role.

Firstly, I will pay much attention to each speaker’s speech and write down the main ideas, including the good ones or bad ones. Besides that, I will mark the information which means a lot to the topic. Also, I will sit by the leader and show him the creative and valuable thoughts from time to time so that the leader can remind the following speakers to focus on a certain point to make sure that the discussion can go more efficiently and smoothly. Lastly, at the end of the discussion I will clearly share with the members what I have recorded.

To sum up, I’d love to be a secretary in group work and I’m sure I will be a great one.

【解析】

题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，表达的是我的期愿“在小组活动中我想做什么”，也就是充当怎样的角色。材料中给出了四个角色：小组长（leader）,记录员（secretary），发言人（spokesperson）和观察员（observer），首先我们要确定自己所选的角色，然后说明选择的原因，分析所写角色的小组工作内容及自己会怎样充当好这个角色。

例文评价：例文采取三段式，第一段开门见山点明自己想要充当的角色，并且说明了自己选择的原因 ；第二段详细的介绍了自己将会如何做好这份工作；第三段总结，再次点明自己选择角色的原因，与第一段呼应。例文以第一人称，并采取一般现在时和一般将来时相结合的时态来写。

高分亮点：

短语：want to be想成为；be qualified for有资格；pay attention to 注意；write down记下；from time to time不时；focus on专注于；make sure确保；point to指向；To sum up要而论之。

句型：I will sit by the leader and show him the creative and valuable thoughts from time to time so that the leader can remind the following speakers to focus on a certain point to make sure that the discussion can go more efficiently and smoothly. 我会坐在领导身边，不时向他展示有创意和有价值的想法，这样领导就可以提醒下面的演讲者专注于某一点，以确保讨论能够更高效、更顺利地进行。so that引导的目的状语从句并使用大量亮点短语。