Question

【题目】书面表达

上中学以来，你有什么改变？ 你是怎样改变的？ 请以“How I have changed？”为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你发生的变化。写作内容可包括兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习习惯等方面。

要求：(1)80—100词；

(2)任选两方面内容；

(3)语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；

(4)文中不得使用真实姓名和校名。

How I have changed?

How time flies! _______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Refuse to Be Phubbers

How time flies! Two years has quickly passed. And I have changed a lot during the two years. My attitude towards study have changed. I wasn’t good at learning English at first, but with the help of my English teacher, I made great progress and became interested in English.

My attitude towards sports also have changed. In my first year, I was too weak to do much exercise, but my teachers and classmates encouraged me to do exercise whenever I was free. Now I can run very fast and I’m also good at playing basketball.

Thanks to my teachers and classmates, I have changed so much!

In a word, we should make good use of smartphones.

【解析】

这是一篇话题类作文，介绍自己过去到现在的生活的变化。本题给出的材料较为简略，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一人称。尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

亮点说明：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和从句，在叙述中使用连接词，使叙述逻辑更为合理，层次更加分明，为文章增色不少。如：be good at doing sth. 擅长于做某事，with the help of……在……的帮助下，等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

【高分句型一】

I wasn’t good at learning English at first, but with the help of my English teacher, I made great progress and became interested in English. 起初我并不擅长学习英语，但在英语老师的帮助下，我取得了很大的进步，并对英语产生了兴趣。

【高分句型二】

In my first year, I was too weak to do much exercise, but my teachers and classmates encouraged me to do exercise whenever I was free. 第一年，我太虚弱了，不能做很多运动，但是我的老师和同学鼓励我空闲的时候做运动。too…to…太……而不能……。encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事。