Question

【题目】书面表达

长大意味着什么？是关心、帮助同学，是体贴、理解父母，是感恩、回报亲朋师长，还是……请以 “I am Not a Child Anymore” 为题，叙述你在学习和生活中经历的一件或两件事，谈谈你对长大的理解。

要求：1. 不少于100词；2. 语言流畅、书写规范。

Answer 1

【答案】I am Not a Child Anymore

I have changed a lot in the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now I am strong and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.

It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked supper. I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was delicious, although it tasted a little salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you've really grown up. ”

It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child anymore.

【解析】

话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。