Question

【题目】加入你是英国交流学生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 两个月的学习生活即将结束。请你根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle School 校长写一封感谢信。

what you've learned about Chinese culture

how the teachers and students help you

what your homestay family do for you

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数 80 左右，感谢信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing,

I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.

I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a P.E. teacher.It is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese paper-cutting in Art lessons.Though I can’t speak Chinese.I have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.

I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make dumplings.We also visited Confucins Temple.We had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.

【解析】

本文是一篇书信作文。根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle School 校长写一封感谢信。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。