1.In → On。在表示具体的日期前,应该用介词on。2. were → was。dust是不可数名词,谓语动词应该用单数。 3. as → like。look like是固定词组,意为\"看起来像\"。 4. calling → called。该分词与所修饰的名词之间是动宾关系,故此处用过去分词作定语。 5. 去掉第一个the。space前一般不用冠词。 6. brought → took。此处指\"带去\",而不是\"带来\"。 7. pick → picking。spend time
(in) doing sth. 是固定句型。 8. set后面加up。set up是固定词组,意为\"安放\"。 9. works
→ work。 work意为\"工作\"时,是不可数名词。10. 本行无错。
范文:
October
29, 2003
Dear Li Ming,
How are you? Are you still spending a lot of time in studying English? I
remember that you told me you wanted to find some proper English newspaper to
read. Now I have an exciting news to tell you.
New Century School Edition was published on October 15th , 2003. So far, it’s
the first weekly English newspaper in China which is edited according to the
reading level and requirements of middle school students. Many popular things
are introduced in simple English. It has many sections, for example, our world,
campus trends, entertainment, sports, science life and learning with us.
Reading them can help you enlarge your vocabulary and broaden your knowledge. I
advise you to read the newspaper if necessary. I’m sure you can learn more from
it.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,