摘要：2． 120-140个词 Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship． [答案] Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship． Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and classmates as well as teachers is good． However, there exist some problems: some students in our grade easily lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden． What's worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing． In my opinion, we middle school students should make effort to improve the situation． First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as classmates． Second, when we are not feeling good or happy, we can chat with our friends or even parents． It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice． Third, after a day's hard work, we can relax by exercising , such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on． [解析]此文章属于提纲式作文.主要应该抓住关键点.尤其是关键词句:the relationship between us students and classmates as well as teachers.some students in our grade easily lose their temper.they sometimes quarrel with others,还有注意陈述自己的观点:in my opinion.书面表达的批改是分档次的.应该尽可能多用高级词汇及词组.例如:generally speaking.because of.what's worse.It is likely that等.还应该注意句子之间的连贯性.尽量避免单一句式的重叠现象.多使用适当连接词.例如:however.first.second.third等.一切准备工作均是一等作文的必然要求. 16(2011·辽宁省铁岭六校高三第三次联考) 第二节:书面表达 假设有一批英国中学生将来你校就读.校方要求你在开班典礼上介绍一下学校的有关要求.请 按以下要点写一篇发言稿. l 上学要穿戴整洁 l 上课不迟到.早退 l 保持校园清洁 l 走路靠右行,若要骑车上学.请办自行车许可证 注意: ．

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